Wednesday, 21 November 2018

summer poem


for writing we did a summer poem  I  had . I Hear  I Smell I Feel I Taste and I See




























































































































































































































































































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  1. Anonymous22 November 2018 at 13:26

    Kia Ora
    My name is Jaeda in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked your summer poem it reminded me of summer and the beach, it was really clear to see the writing and the pictures. Maybe next time you could check your blog post with a teacher to see if your spelling is correct. Also next time you could add to your blog post what was hard for you and what was easy for you.But other then that I liked it.
    If you would like to see my blog here is my address!
    http://wpsjaedaa.blogspot.com/

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  2. Meee10 June 2019 at 15:41

    Kia ora Jade
    My name is Ebony I am a student at Kawakawa primary and I am 11 years old. Summer is my favourite season what is yours? I like your poem about summer it makes me feel like I am at the beach. Remember before you post make sure you check you spelling.

    Link to my blog: https://kpsebonyn.blogspot.com/

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